I liked it
-It definitely stays true to your style that I noticed you like to use in your work. It's so much different than other vocalists in how you use a much different pace and it doesn't need to be fluid. It works great in bursts, just like an assault rifle.
-The line at :39 is by far my favorite. It's the whole reason little kids love the internet. Most of what you said is very true though. It's very easy to get lost on the internet once you are on it. One thing leads to another and then you're spending hours a day on there.
-The music is quite interesting. The guitar is suprisingly slow compared to the rest of the beat. It gives it a nice bright contrast that gives an easy listening experience to an otherwise fast paced song.
-It however doesn't really come together as a whole. The music is a bit too loud for the vocals. Try equalizing the sound. Either that or just lower the volume of the background music. It will make it much easier to hear what you are saying.
-Review Request Club