Score: 10

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submission: Ackbar : The End

date: September 19, 2007

Good joke, but I doubt you'll ever stop this series as long as you still come here.

Score: 10

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submission: Goth Lyfe 16: Fun'n'Games

date: September 19, 2007

It's awesome to watch all of the episodes and see how much you've improved, this series has really become one of my favorites. The storyline was pretty funny and I loved the extra content in the movie. Please don't let scepter die, he's my favorite character and it just wouldn't be the same without him.

Score: 10

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submission: - Rhythm Fireworks -

date: September 19, 2007

I love the song choices you made, the beats layed out to be perfect for fireworks. Your tutorial incorporated in the beginning was better than putting a tutorial button, it also gives you confidence and a little boost to your score and multiplier. I liked the color change, it made it a lot more difficult to play and i've been looking for a rythm game like this for a long time. I suggest that you make a version 2 with level lay out and difficulty of the song.

Score: 7

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submission: Goth Lyfe 1: Intro

date: September 19, 2007

I'm not too sure about the graphics, very smudgy around the edges. The animation is also not very good, some of it definitely looks tweened. Well it's just an intro so it doesn't really matter that much.

Score: 7

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submission: Odyssic's NG Log

date: September 19, 2007

-I think it was oversimplistic even for a NG-Bitesize movie.
-Graphics were a little bit questionable, they definitely could of been improved.
-I loved the line with stat-whore in it, i'm a notable review whore sometimes.
-Your overall portrayal of ng-log being easy to use is a great way to get more people to join up. Great job at accomplishing the task casualty set up.

~Review Request Club~

Score: 8

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submission: Jim and Pals Shorts: Ep 3

date: September 19, 2007

---I liked the faded in green loading animation in the beginning, reminded me a lot of my engineering classes basic outlines for objects.
---I'm not exactly sure about the title screen, it looks very drab, none of the colors really jumped out at me.
---I liked how you shadowed everything up to the sun, just a little detail that makes a movie so much better.
---Stay away from the gradients, it didn't look too good on your character. I recommend trying a different kind of color combination.
---I know that this was a short but you could easily make some of your later episodes longer by putting in a good plot.

~Review Request Club~

Score: 8

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submission: --teaser Hero WAR Arena--

date: September 19, 2007

It's cool that you ask us to pick the characters for the game. Overall for the movie though it wasn't good.

Score: 7

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submission: Black Tar Stick Figure

date: September 19, 2007

Your intro was definitely the best part of it, looked interesting even though it probably didn't take much work(tweens). Overall animation was very choppy, I think you could of added more frames in there for the movements of the sticks to make it look more smooth.

Score: 9

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submission: The Adventures of Pengy

date: September 18, 2007

That was very good for a first flash. Your overall drawing and animating of the water and characters was very good and smooth. I was a bit puzzled though as to why the penguin was jumping after the fish, he could of done that waddling thing that penguins do to get to the fish. The ending was expected maybe try to change it up a little bit and make some suprises that the viewer wouldn't expect to happen.

Score: 5

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submission: Just Eat It

date: September 18, 2007

I'm not sure about your start with stuff just popping in, maybe substitute it with a nice slide in animation to look better. The animating of the hand for the guitar also looked wierd because he went from having three fingers to just two and back again. The ending also seemed to drop off too fast and should of been longer. Make those adjustments and this movie will be much better.

~Review Request Club~