Quite Good
-I myself didn't enjoy it as much as your other works though, maybe it's just me but I don't like your cutie alien characters very much. Especially for that flash you wanted to send to MTV.
-Since we are relating to the characters you choose, why not have something more mysterious, so that we can all find a way to weave ourselves into the story. For intance check out Pustota, the way Kol does his characters is very interesting, and matches his music very well.
-Everyone chooses there own style, i'm just hoping that you don't choose these characters to be your main creations. I take Fine Arts and Pottery and the main thing for good art work is to intrigue with a great storyline, graphics and emotion (which you do (well you could work on the emotion)), but not to give everything away.
-I feel most connected to Alphin and his world actually, because it's so creative and original. More then anything though he carries a specific emotion of childish ignorance and bliss from the non-conformity world. Although engineered has an interesting world and storyline it's characters are very cute and anime like, alomst seeming to be dehumanized face expressions. Since they don't seem to have any depth to themselves (just strands of emotive like anger) the fact that they speak a strange language just further dehumanizes them.