sixflab's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[That Other Stall]

Lol

-Yes, everyone has had this happen in their lifetime if they have gone to enough public restrooms. I swear the nasty people only go to the bathroom in these places so they don't have to clean up the mess they make.

-It looks like your standard bathroom with writing all over the stalls that just never seem to be cleaned. Honestly it just takes a little cleaner and some elbow work and it will come off. I love the green odorous mist that is slowly flowing from the other stall. I would be absolutely terrified too so I understand completely why you have the girl cringing in the corner covering her nose.

-I'm really glad that you made this. It's hilarious and well drawn as well. I love little pieces of work that are meant to just make you laugh and aren't too serious.

-Review Request Club

jaymanimation responds:

haha ty! glad you liked it. yea its the simple things in life that always make the impression and the good memories to look back and laugh. ty again ^-^

[Cute Robot]

Great

-The little icon you used for this picture was enough to make me want to see the rest of the art submission. It's a great piece of work.

-The background is what suprised me the most. The wierd robotic tentacle things coming up out of the ground painted against the black night sky is different than most things I see here. The stars aren't the brightest but they blend in with the darkness of the rest of the colors.

-The robot is a nice center piece and he has tons of detail. His arms and face are bold pieces that show that he is a primitive robot but he does have the ability to walk fluidly like a human and less like a classic robot would. He is following a path made out of the grass and most likely getting away from the tentacles.

Shanewozere responds:

I did this a year or 2 ago now :)

Done alot more since then

thanks for the compliments :) Feel free to look at my other works

[Bahamuts Playing Poker]

Everyone's favorite dragon x5

-I was browsing the level up lounge and on one of Bahamut's many many posts he had a link that said amazing piece of art or something along that lines so I just had to come and see what he was talking about. To my pleasant suprise it was the pick me up that I needed. I haven't had the best of days so far and this made me smile.

-The background has that dark murky look to it that you would expect when in a place where cards are played. You don't want anyone to have a way to see your cards better than they ought to. The grandfather clock and the painting seem to be both tilted which I doubt you meant to do. Using some sort of right triangle or draftsmans tool(integrated into the background) to level things out can make this easier to get correct with the background.

-The Bahamut's could use some more detail and fine lines with shading to give them more definition and make them look less flat. As they are now they look like they could be blown away by the slightest wind from starvation. The light on top is off kilter and could of been made more centered from the point of origin on the top. It does however supply ample light for the cardplayers which was perfect in my opinion.

-I loved how you gave each Bahamut a different expression or emotion to make it feel more realistic which was drawn from the original piece. The cards aren't the most detailed pieces of work but they are passable. Also including the chips is a nice touch but they seem just like dots and not pieces. The chairs also don't seem realistic and look like pieces of plastic the way the colors are. Try adding detail accordingly to make them look like wood or your respective seating choice.

-Overall like I said even though it may not be the most well drawn or detailed piece of work it was humorous and brightened my day to see such a spectacle come to fruition.

-Review Request Club

reverend responds:

Thank you for this detailed review. You have been a great help kind sir!

[CHOW #36]

Great Job

-I love the cartoon Johnny Bravo. It was just so funny. I think it's quite interesting using colored pencils. They work great for drawing and coloring if used properly. You could of shaded the colored pencils a little lighter with darker outlines to make the picture just pop out.

Kashi responds:

Yeah, im not really comfortable with colored pencils, so i was just winging it and hoping it was at least decent. i did much better than i expected though :)

[Lotus Sword resting spot]

Amazing

-Well your effort paid off. The lighting effects are by far some of the best that I have seen in the art portal. You took the time and effort to have the light be broken apart by the trees and then shine on the respected spots to add in extra shadowing and the shine on the sword.

-The plants are so lush and green while the flowers are so colorful. It makes everything just pop out at you and really helps with adding dimensions to the piece. The sword may not be in the center but the lighting angle compensates for it nicely. The many different colored fungi speckled about make the environment seem like a damp habitat where you would think more wildlife would be around.

-I hope you get a good grade on your project and I was wondering if the rock was supposed to look kind of like a hedgehog or if this was unintentional?

-Review Request Club

Akavirtoon responds:

Thank you very much! I really appreciate your review :)
I got a 9/10, which is actually more than I have hoped for XD

[death with cloth modifier]

Well

It's not as detailed as most death concepts are. It's just very basic overall. The cloth modifier does add some detail to the robe but that's the only detail that is involved. The skeleton is very basic and looks like plastic.

DeadOnStudios responds:

Sadly this isn't concept work it is 3d and 3d is more difficult to get those extra details in... I spent hours in zbrush painting on the objs and then when i used the deforms in maya they just didnt pick up the kind of detail that i wish it would have. When i forced it to do so it made it look like parts of the face had exploded.. lol... and also i agree about the plastic look.. its in the jaw and teeth right... you caught me.. ;) I didn't fully finish this piece. I stopped the project all together

[{BT} Mondra Roder III]

Nice

The sphere looks kind of like a metallic glass sitting on top of the sand. The shadowing effects are nicely done. I actually like that you didn't include anything in the background. It would take away from the sphere being the focal point of the piece.

BenTibbetts responds:

Thank you.

[{BT} Alienose]

Interesting

It's quite interesting. The colors are melded well. I think you should of done it across the whole painting area instead of just a diamond. It limited what you could do.

BenTibbetts responds:

Fair enough. Thanks for the comment.

[goofer the gravemonster!]

Great Job

-If the picture wasn't awesome enough the author comments make him sound even better. He is quite the formidable behemoth to be sulking around graveyards.

-The shadowing is really good and it gives you an obvious figure of where the sun would be coming from. I'd say it's about dusk and he's ready to get to work.

jouste responds:

very cool time setting!

yeah i would think that dusk is a good time for him to start his business.

thanks for the wicked review and comments!

*highfives*

[delirium trigger]

Oh Yes!

-It's a great action scene that pulls you into how that guy must be feeling. The utter feeling that he won't make it out alive. Fighting something he doesn't know exactly how to combat or hide from. Sadly he's not doing that good of a job at the hiding part.

-You would think in space though he would have a more advanced weapon though. It's also a bit smudgy but that's most likely a side effect of how it was drawn.

ffatboijosh responds:

thx for the awesome review! it was actually inspired by the coheed and cambria song: delirium trigger.