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[The Little Girl]

Loved it

-This is a master piece... I love the gothic style of it all. And the Tim was absolutely perfect! You must make more! You have to make more! I really disagreed with the fact that she was "forgotten". In most house holds like that, the servants were not permitted to interact with the family or its children, unless ordered to but seeing as this is about a three year old girl, and it's from her perspective, I can understand why she sees it that way.

On the possitive side:
-Unique Characters, story and style
-The colorations/shading were perfect
-Animation was fluid
-Perfect Music selection
-Perfect subtitles

On the negative side:
-The whole, being forgotten theory, sort of faulty but aside from that, there's nothing else.

[Operation: Graveyard]

Pico Day

-It could've used sound effects. Voice overs weren't necessary for this, as the dialogue was pretty brief, but the dialogue could've been written better; it was very redundant. "Get her!" "Get rid of her!" "Take care of her!" "I'll summon the demon!" "and now I'll summon the demon!" "Summon the demons!" y'know what I mean? Could've been more creative.

-Also, the initial fight scene with all the goths was choppy. Watch it's pace and you'll see what I mean...the fight doesn't have fluid progression, it's just very paced...one action, stop, another action, stop. It didn't seem to be very human OR very choreographed. It's just something to keep an eye out for that I don't think any other reviewer is going to point out because they're overwhelmed by the sheer quality of the animation. Don't get me wrong, it's fantastic! But you could benefit more from criticism than slurp-slurps.

-There were moments of spectacular animated sequences in this, and it gives Nene justice...another Pico Day submission well-done!

[Walk-Smash-Walk]

Well

That was pretty damn good for a music video - Admittedly, not my thing, but the entire thing slotted together so well. From day to night, same routine, crunking beat...It was good. I gave it 10 for style because it had a brilliant, systematic theme going on which I thought was excellent. Well done!

[TSAH]

Well

This animation of halo I found was very amusing and I enjoyed watching it more than once, I still laugh every time I watch it. It gives a great hilarious spin on the actual Xbox game, Halo and turns many of the famous game scenes into an enjoyable laugh. Two thumbs up go toward this great flash animation and its creators.

[Sky And Earth]

Just ugly

-The lip-synching was off a little which is most likely becuase of how slow the words were actually being said. It's an easy fix if you just practice it a little.

-The animation was just basic and with practice can also be improved. You only had parts move one way. They weren't very dynamic.

-The story was very short and needed to be a bit longer in my opinion. Just work out a solid storyline and make an animation off of that.

-You obviously have potential since you have some skill at drawing already. Work on your overall animating skill and audio incorporating and you'll have a packaged deal.

-Review Request Club

up-a-notch responds:

thanks man

[@@englishclock Vs Trickyc]

Haha

-Well the author comments really need to be adjusted for this since none of that is actually true about this animation. No nude girls, little violence, and it didn't make me want this flash.

-I enjoyed the little bout of words at the beginning but the sound was much too low and in the actual fight the sounds were way too high. Try making the audio volume consistent through the whole video so you can listen to the whole thing comfortably without having to adjust the volume.

-Once again the drawing could use some work since it is a little sloppy. It's extremely noticable when EnglishClock moves around since the extra parts that weren't properly removed are flailing across the screen in random places.

-Overall I rather enjoyed watching this since there was a lot of humor and randomness in the fight but it could be so much better if you payed attention to your work and touched it up a little to make it look nicer.

-Review Request Club