Well
That was an amazing job you did for your first flash movie in general. The animation wasn't the best and felt a little jostly at times in the movement of characters. I will have to say the lipsynching was above average though. I didn't see any flaws with it and the overall plot was just hilarious. Your drawing skills are really good though. I'm guessing you used a tablet of some sort to get the fine details that you did. I really see a lot of potential if you had a desire to really get into flash animating. You would just need to learn some actionscript and smooth out your animation.