sixflab's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Etude #5 - Moonlight]

Just wow

-This was played beautifully. The notes flowed so well together and i'm still not sure as to how you were able to get the different notes to connect so well together. Anyhow this is very pleasing to the ear and I can listen to it over and over again and still like it as much as the first time.

-I'm all in favor that you slowed it down since it sounds so good at the pace that you used here. If you would of done it faster some of the notes would of overlapped a little and sounded a bit wierd.

-Overall it's one of my favorite audio portal songs that i've come across. There is so much imagery that comes up when listening to it.

-Review Request Club

Darkmaster603 responds:

Hey thanks I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing it. This is one of my favoreites, and I'm working on a longer version.

[I Hate Jologs People]

Lol

-First of all i'm not sure how you made this after attempting to make a classical song. It is a fail in that regard but what you ended up with certainly isn't. Yes it can use a little less bass here and there while playing out the drums a little more in sections instead of keeping the constant fast drum beat that you were using.

-The melody sounded very good with the beat of the drums and continued to show out more and more as the song progressed giving it a more melodic tune rather than the brash beat you had at the beginning. In my opinion it just got better and better.

-Review Request Club

Sawdust responds:

Thanks so much sorry for the late reply!

[Clear (Rezurrected Mix)]

Quite Enjoyable

-The nice thumping bass in the intro was very good at drawing me into the song. The only problem with this was you just completely dropped it at :45 for a much less thump and didn't add any more dynamics to the song to replace it. This left the song rather dull for a good fourty seconds.

-The song picked back up with the pads at 1:29 but you didn't really go anywhere with it which was dissapointing. You just seemed to do a rinse and repeat method with the song.

-It would of been more enjoyable with more dynamics involved with the song. It would of became less repetitive and more interesting to listen to. It is much better than the previous version of it though so it does show improvement.

-Review Request Club

ReziUze responds:

Thank you very much for the review! As I've mentioned before, I am not very good at adding in new elements, resulting in repetition. Thanks for noticing it's better than the other version!

[Too Awesome For Your Phone!]

Phone

-I'm going to guess this was made for the sole purpose of ringtone use. It's a rock song with nice riffs but you can't elaborate it too much as speakers on phones really suck. Really good songs sound aweful on my phone just for this fact and I really hate it.

-Rich sound textures really make this enjoyable to listen to even if the bass is drubbed down a bit. I think you can do a lot with this concept if you decide to make a full blown song out of it.

-Review Request Club

SantaBro responds:

Thanks! I guess I could elaborate on the riffs and melodies, but not the general sound.

[Kina Grannis-Valentine (Cover)]

Touching

-It's so slow and dramatic in tune. Quite different than the actual version. This is very hard to do since the piano is such a delicate instrument for being so large. I'd like to see some more classical instruments slowly added as the song goes on to make it even more dramatic. Even if they are computer programmed in it would be a nice touch.

-Review Request Club

Jabicho responds:

Thanks for the review!
I'll try making some instruments additions in future pieces =)

[Snow Burner]

Well

-It comes in a little slow and takes a bit to get into the actual melody. The melody however was quite joyful and precise. Eight-bit just has that jumpy precise sound to it that is hard to not like.

-The drawn out notes mixed with the quick parts gave it a nice ebb and flow overall. It does show the skiing aspects.

-Review Request Club

Shellac responds:

I'm still on this gigantic learning curve with my production at the mo... This track sounds awful to me now listening back to it! I guess that means I'm making progress.

I tried to get a melody in there fairly quickly. I've got an 8 bar build there, it sounded weird with less but maybe I should have just started with the melody straight out given the overall length of the track.

Thanks for the review!

[Just Hold On (Dream Remix)]

Ummm

-Either there was some uploading problem or this was mixed awfully. It's distorted the whole way through. I really doubt that was on purpose since it makes it sound so bad. Also what was up with chopping the ending off? There isn't a solid ending to the song. It just abruptly ends and leaves me guessing.

I can't tell if it needs work for the most part though since there is an audio problem as stated before. It's off alignment or has some awful distortion.

Review Request Club

DXsamurai responds:

thanks for the review but damnit i already got a review from Review Request Club.
stop

[[S:C] Mr. Funkhausen]

Good Job

-Quite an interesting collaborational work. The drum work is excellent in it's own regards and were mixed well even though they are a bit light. Come to think of it the instruments as a whole are very light. I'm guessing lyrical work was planned for this but still needs to be added.

-The only issue I had was with how much use of the cymbals there was. It's probably the pace setter you used but it drones on towards the end. Also the thirty blank seconds at the end. You can trim that stuff off.

-Review Request Club

SymbolCymbal responds:

Well right now newgrounds own BIGRED (Tingtonger) is composing the lyrics to this piece .. once i get the lyrical audio in there this is going to get revamped a bit. ill definitely take your cymbal comment into consideration while redoing some stuff. This song will actually be available on the haiti relief album coming out soon. If not the haiti relief album it will be on some sort of charity album.

Thanks for the sweet review man

[DiscoSex(WiP)]

Lol

-Those vocals are crisp, clean, and quite interesting. Especially the moan towards the end. It definitely needs some snare to give more dimension. It's very repetitive in the instrumental aspects of the song. This could only benefit from being extended and adding some more vocals.

-Review Request Club

DavidRx responds:

thx for the review ;D...sry for the HUUUUGE DELAY XD

sadly...lost this flp. too ;S so i cant continue it D;

[Sweet Release]

Well

-It comes in way too slow as it takes thirty seconds for the main melody to actually kick into full gear. The piano is very static and stays with the same beat for most of the first two minutes. This makes the song feel very dull and uninventive. Also if at all possible make it multi-layered with either different octaves or complimenting rythms to add effect to the trance.

-Overall it's just way too slow and repetitive for me. If you want to really get into trance songs I would suggest making them a little less in length and speed it up a lot.

-Review Request Club

Dj-GST responds:

Slow fade in was for slow buildup, I like it.

K...

Trance songs are long and slow progressing, I know that much, so making it shorter would be dumb.

Trance isn't supposed to be fast man. When you listen to it it's suppoesed to feel like your in a trance, hence the genre.

If you want fast go listen to some Speedcore or something.