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[Raver Girl (Radio Edit)]

Review

This is really good. Well paced and high music quality. I'm suprised it took two years to make though. There must of been some sort of delay. Well anyway i'm glad that it's finally finished and it's ready for all of us to listen to.

AisareneMusic responds:

Mostly finished, and, yes, it was a 2 year on/off project. It's come a long way from the original. Thank you for the review. ^^"
xxAisarene

[Op For Remixed]

Great

The Modern Warfare 2 music definitely needed to be spruced up like you did here. It's a lot more interesting and dynamic than what they have in game.

nal1200 responds:

I agree! :D

Nice icon, by the way. I loved GS!

[Interplanetary Medium]

Review

-Ahh this definitely needs some remastering. The sound is off several times in the beginning and the synth being added was by far the worst part. When it first comes in it's very rough sounding. It does get better as it progresses and mixes with the original melody that you built. Just touch up some parts in the beginning of the synth at 0:28.

-I love what you did with the melody. It's very space-y and pumps in and out at a nice pace while slowly progressing the song through each respective element. The song would of just felt empty without it. The percussion elements where blended beautifully throughout the first half of the song with it.

-The break at about 2:00 was well placed but it took away the melody that I loved so much. It just left everything up in the air floating and grasping for something solid to hold onto. Just synths alone don't really catch my attention enough to stand alone by themselves. I wouldn't of minded this if you let that be the fade out aspect of the song but you started it way too early in the song. If you would of made the ending last less time it would of worked out much better.

-Review Request Club

jxl180 responds:

Thank you very much for the helpful review!

[What She Did]

Review

-While reading the author comments beforehand it made me honestly chuckle at the EDIT part. It's not necessarily funny but it's serious and then takes a dramatic turn at that part.

-It seems like someone was influenced by an obscure band. It's not usual to see a song with lyrics structured in this way. It makes it seem almost like a 2000-2003 emo band with the slow-fast-slow-fast style but it's a rock song for the most part.

-This could definitely use some more variety in the instumentals and have the vocals a little louder since they get drowned out by the instruments in the beginning.

-Review Request Club

Sawdust responds:

Thanks man!

[Look At Us (757irish Remix)]

Good job

Not really what I would call top 5 of the week worthy but to everyone their own achievement. I seem to have opposite opinions from most of the users on here lately. You did a great job editing the original with your own style and I can tell a lot of work went into this but I have listened to better work come into the portal this week.

757irish responds:

Indeed haha i agree with you 100% on this comment. But you know how NG is these days...Just zero bombs :/ anyway thanks for the honest review :)

[-__--__--_numa numa _--__--__-]

It's ok

It is realy good and i enjoyed it alot but the only problem is its sounds too much like a polyphonic ringtone. If you changed some of the instrument sounds and made them sound a bit more... serious, i think it could be better.

Alexman159 responds:

thank you

[dadgad v2]

Review

-When I first came to the page and saw a 2.4 score I was well prepared to see some junk music that was shoddily put together. But upon listening to this I was suprised at how well it was done regardless of the program that you used to put it together. It's a shame how voting matters so much when something first comes into the audio portal. Well I jumped your score up 0.32 and it's a little closer to the 3.5 score that I think it deserves.

-The guitar is played well and it sounds a lot like an old country western type of mood the way it is played. Nice and mellow with a bit of delay. I did notice a couple of pitch changes but nothing too drastic. I look forward to seeing you improve in the future.

-Review Request Club

loansindi responds:

Thanks for the review, and sorry for the delayed response. I've sort of been uninterested in NG for a while.

Glad you enjoyed the track.

[[herd] Techno Haven]

Hmmm

-After listening to this several times it seemed to be just a rather awkward song. It has a high pitched melody with plenty of bass. Sounds great on paper and it would be great with just that but I was rather confused why you used a dark deep sounding synth with it. Personally I would rather like deep undertones instead. Less abrasive sounding and can mesh really well.

-Review Request Club

Herdunculus responds:

I can see what you mean. I will take this advice with me on my next song. Hopefully it will sound better to you =D

[LB - Broken]

Broken

-The song build accurately portrays how the song played out. Having a melody that broke down into dissaray just to pick itself back up and become better than it was before.

-The piano playing was spectacular and picked everything up. It definitely felt like the defining instrument. It wasn't used much but it was used in the right places(picking up violin solo, beginning, and ending).

-I'm sorry I can't really elaborate more but i'm sort of in the broken stage of my life and it's carrying over towards my reviewing :(

-Review Request Club

Lublub194 responds:

Why thank you for these kind words. I appreciate them.

It's interesting you say that you yourself are in a broken stage. I think we always are, and we have to hold the parts that we want the most together. We can never have it all.

Anyways, I'm glad you liked this. Thanks for the review :D

[The War Hawks]

Review

-I loved the simplicity of the track in the beginning. Just letting the basic melody repeat a couple of times to get you into things.

-At 1:08 it changed a little but it made it seem darker and deeper. Followed up by the increase in speed about fourty seconds later. It really helped get you out of the monotone beat that you started to get into.

-The drums were overused in my opinion. Just way too much percussion compared to the guitars being used. Especially towards the end of the song. You can keep the drum solo if you had less drums being used in the entire whole of the song.

-Review Request Club

MixyRecords responds:

Sorry, I normally try to reply right away but I didn't notice the reviews..
I greatly appreciate the feedback. As I said I'm going to back and remix the song. I will definitely subdue the drum parts toward the end. I see what you are talking about. I will send you the updated version once I'm done (should be soon).