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-Wow! From the last animation that I watched from you to this one there is so much improvement. Yes, it's almost a two year difference but it really does show that if you stay with flash you can make some good works. I can definitely see that there was some time put into this since it was quite lengthy.
-Biggest improvement is that while you only had one shape for the mouth of the character all of the dialogue was right on que with the mouth animation. Really slow to progress I thought it wasn't going to go anywhere but you eventually proved me wrong when I finally noticed that he was asking different questions and then...the phone rang. It was probably the most annoying ring i've ever heard but it went in a whole new direction that I liked.
-It ended way too abruptly though, there could of been a better ending for this. Maybe have the fish talk back or something come up at the window. Just anything would of been better than what you left it at.
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