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[this movie is about robot]

Robot?

-It really seems to me that you like the ambient background noise since it is used in several of your works as something to fill up space and keep us entertained. This is better than the last one but not by much since there still isn't that much as far as animating involved.

-Cropping is one of the things that I think you could of put a little more time into to improve how some of the things looked. It just makes the work seem shoddy when you don't take the time to do something simple like that. Just take more time when making something.

-Review Request Club

[FutureShock]

Future

-Some pretty generic storytelling went on in this flash that I didn't particularly find that amusing for the simple fact that it has been overdone. People fake being from the future and unsuspecting person believes them and the epic hoax lives on. It became more enjoyable as it progressed and patriotclock did go to the future.

-The ending sadly could of been worked on a little better since the ending looks rushed some. You animated the last scene quickly going up the building and when he finally couldn't take the shock of the future and ended himself you didn't do any over the top effects that we so love and enjoy.

-Review Request Club

PatriotClock responds:

Yes I was running out of time with the last scene, as this was submitted for a Phlash Phandango contest. I had to leave the next day so I hastily put together the ending and shady bounced. Thanks for the review

[Dont Shave Pubes On Plane]

Epic Win

-It's not very often that there is someone who can make a flash movie about 9/11 and it bring a chuckle to me without me actually thinking about the bad side effects of what happened.

-Definitely a great PSA that hearkened back to the old days of animation with the greyscale and flickering movie tape. Some pretty swell animating and speakonia voices incorporated and I definitely learned an important lesson today that I will make sure that I don't forget.

-Review Request Club

PatriotClock responds:

Thank you very much

[how it will end.]

Nice

So, this was part of a writing assignment? You got lots of imagination to have made this. The zombie dad part was especially funny. And I liked how the guy trapped on the island knew there was no sense in worrying about his life at the moment, so just relaxed and looked at the picture of the pumpkin cloud. And then, WALKING WHALES!

[Abo's Facebook Adventure]

Nice Job

This one in particular struck home because it's so true. Over the past year, I have removed almost 300 people from my Facebook, largely because they would all post the most trivial, useless crap. I was so sick of seeing the minifeed filled with messages like "Dude I just made a sandwich!" and "I forgot to clip one of my fingernails! FML." Seems like modern forms of communication are ironically flinging us back into the Stone Age. Anyway, great animation; on par with the rest of your work.

[Halo Armageddon]

That Was Excellent

I will just start out saying "I LOVED THIS" - very nice job on the graphics and i liked the way you placed the worms :) very much like the game. The only things I thought were 'cheesy' about this was that the 'storyline' did take a few twists but its logic was odd. They barely attacked the 'Master Chief' worm, that would have been a major target, but i will stop ranting about that becuz you did a very nice job with the rest. For the movement though, it didnt look smooth sometimes, having a worm fly out of the camera's view would have been a very nice touch becuz that happens all the time with super banana bombs and holy hand grenades :) - but overall, excellent job.

[B Cause of U (in Halo 2)]

Good Job

Good job dude, i have to say without bing professional, i certainly liked it. Great use of non-moving halo pictures though lol :P It made me laugh, worked well, and was worth my time to give a review, so your doing pretty good lol.

[Bunnykill 4]

Great as always

Your animation skills are just absolutely outstanding. You've also not made the same mistake the Madness series has by making the enemies just "wait" for the hero to kill them. Every bunny shoots to kill and you've kept the fights simple and realistic without any desperate addons in order to keep it fun. In fact I'm incredibly impressed you havn't fallen for the same mistakes as Krinkels. There was so much effort put into this and it was just consistent the entire way through, the only thing I'd possibly add to this series is continuing narrative so that it is actually leading somewhere. Absolutely brilliant piece of work.