sixflab's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Mac & Cheze Show]

Golly Gee

-Oh shucks. With the beginning I thought you were actually going to create some sort of scary oldies style kids show but as it progressed I was sadly mistaken.

-Well the video was a little shocking since it's a cat devouring what appears to be an already dead mouse. The quality could of also been much better since it's very difficult to even discern what the cat is eating.

-Review Request Club

[The world don't move]

Um wierd

-Well for once meatgrinderclock actually does what he is designed to do. I'm not saying he did it well since he didn't exactly grind up Gary Coleman into anything but what appeared to be a fine paste. Maybe you could of made it more interesting by doing something with the grinded up remains or had some sort of animation for Gary Coleman when he does get grinded up.

-What i'm trying to say is that it gets boring very fast since not that much is going on. There is so much to be desired with adding more to the ending to really make this gruesome which seems to be what you were going for.

-Review Request Club

[Edbert and Otis ep. 6-10]

Hilarious

-That was amazing. It's quite spammy and looks to be intentionally annoying since you kept using the static for their voices over the course of ten episodes. Regardless I found it to be hilarious throughout the episodes. Having them bundled up into a convenient package just made it better since I was able to quickly go from episode to episode and laugh at the ever increasingly funny antics.

-By now you've probably stopped working on this series for a while but that doesn't mean that you couldn't bring it back with improved visuals. It's one of those spammy series that's actually worth watching.

-Review Request Club

[DwarfinatorClock's quest]

Epic Quest

-Seeing as this is one of your older movies it's not the best of quality. The drawing has some issues and quite honestly I thought it was pretty funny the way it looked all thrown together like you did the coloring in five minutes. The quality can be allowed to lapse a bit if other parts make up for it.

-The actual story for instance. I was really impressed at the length of the quest and how dedicated Dwarfinator Clock was to finding the X. The narrator did kind of push him in the right direction at the beginning and he played a major role in making me laugh as he threw several curveballs and just added to the insane randomness of the story. Overall I think you did a great job putting something together for Clock Day way back when.

-Review Request Club

[Vintage Voicemail 2]

Lol

-This is one of the oddest animations i've seen in a while and what makes it absolute gold is that J-Kellz actually did this at some point in real life since you said something about that in the author comments. Just thinking about him actually doing that made it so much funnier than if you made this up.

-It's not the best animating since it seems spur of the moment and it's not touched up in some areas where the lip synching is off. I'm not saying it's bad since it's above average but some more time could of been taken to make everything look better. I was confused by the guy in the background. He was probably related to this story somehow but I just see it as complete randomness to have him jumping up and down across the screen.

-Review Request Club

YoinK responds:

oh the audio was taken from a youtube video. And that's our friend snakebite who does that crazy jumping dance move when he's drunk. They were both drunk during this incident which makes it funnier.

[<blank> (0m41s)]

Nice and Simple

-While not the most interesting music to use as the base for this animation it had that odd sense of just pulling you into it with the beginning notes. The song stays rather consistent and doesn't leave you much to work with in the long run since it is less than a minute long.

-The animating fit nicely with the song which is the best thing going for this animation considering it's so short. There were tons of things going on at the start but you just seemed to run out of ideas towards the end when everything was enveloped by the alien head thing that came out of the screen. Wobble is okay for me but it was a little overdone and the drawings could of come out cleaner.

-Review Request Club

Surn responds:

"had that odd sense of just pulling you into it with the beginning notes."
Interesting, Wonder how I could replicate that effect again.

"seemed to run out of ideas at the end"
The "alien head" consumed everything, giving me little to work with.

"Wobble is okay for me but it was a little overdone and the drawings could come out cleaner."
From what people are saying it sounds like if one uses the "wobble effect" they should not use it as much as I did.

Thanks for the input, it was helpful.

[TF: Revenge of the Lolin']

Well

Your lip-synching and sense of pacing is absolutely amazing for your cartoons. And from what I remember, Lip-Synching is really incredibly hard to get down right, especially when you have such fast voices! You animate incredibly well too, and it shows, even though most of them were pretty "simplistic". Unfortunately I'm not much of an animator so I can't give you very strong constructive criticism. XD It's great for what it is, anyway.

[More Brawl Taunts]

Nice Sequel

This movie has a great script just like the previous one. It just a shame that another one won't come out but it's better to make sure that you try not to tap a well if you're not sure there's going to be water. Great script, just needs better grouping so the scenes complement each other. Also seems just a bit random, like you're trying for a hopeful hit and miss kind of humor because you're not sure if it's funny or not when it plays so close to the successful humor of the last movie.

[Cpt Falcon Checkup]

Hilarious

Hilarious. But too short. This needs to be added in with a collection of little shorts like that. It's really funny, but couldn't you have done something else with it too? Not enough to fully satisfy. A+ in terms of humor though so it was worth my time to come and watch this little animation.

[Brawl Taunts]

Good Job

I really liked the randomness of the movie. For someone who hasn't played SSBB (although I've seen it and played SSBM), I was able to understand the jokes, and appealing to a wide audience is good. Voice acting was absolutely brilliant, being varied and funny. For three days' work, this is really a handful. It's a decent length for something whipped up in that amount of time. Most importantly, it was entertaining. I found myself watching it again and again, because this movie succeeds at being random and funny without being stupid and weird. Good work.