sixflab's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Too Awesome For Your Phone!]

Phone

-I'm going to guess this was made for the sole purpose of ringtone use. It's a rock song with nice riffs but you can't elaborate it too much as speakers on phones really suck. Really good songs sound aweful on my phone just for this fact and I really hate it.

-Rich sound textures really make this enjoyable to listen to even if the bass is drubbed down a bit. I think you can do a lot with this concept if you decide to make a full blown song out of it.

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SantaBro responds:

Thanks! I guess I could elaborate on the riffs and melodies, but not the general sound.

[goofy loop.]

Lol

-It's very catchy and fun to listen to. The only downside is it's very short and loops awfully. It's beginning and ending are way too different for it to transition well.

[Kina Grannis-Valentine (Cover)]

Touching

-It's so slow and dramatic in tune. Quite different than the actual version. This is very hard to do since the piano is such a delicate instrument for being so large. I'd like to see some more classical instruments slowly added as the song goes on to make it even more dramatic. Even if they are computer programmed in it would be a nice touch.

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Jabicho responds:

Thanks for the review!
I'll try making some instruments additions in future pieces =)

[Snow Burner]

Well

-It comes in a little slow and takes a bit to get into the actual melody. The melody however was quite joyful and precise. Eight-bit just has that jumpy precise sound to it that is hard to not like.

-The drawn out notes mixed with the quick parts gave it a nice ebb and flow overall. It does show the skiing aspects.

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Shellac responds:

I'm still on this gigantic learning curve with my production at the mo... This track sounds awful to me now listening back to it! I guess that means I'm making progress.

I tried to get a melody in there fairly quickly. I've got an 8 bar build there, it sounded weird with less but maybe I should have just started with the melody straight out given the overall length of the track.

Thanks for the review!

[Just Hold On (Dream Remix)]

Ummm

-Either there was some uploading problem or this was mixed awfully. It's distorted the whole way through. I really doubt that was on purpose since it makes it sound so bad. Also what was up with chopping the ending off? There isn't a solid ending to the song. It just abruptly ends and leaves me guessing.

I can't tell if it needs work for the most part though since there is an audio problem as stated before. It's off alignment or has some awful distortion.

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DXsamurai responds:

thanks for the review but damnit i already got a review from Review Request Club.
stop

[Big Red - Never Going Hom]

Nice

-The lyrics are great and flow well. Most of the time you sound great but occasionally when you go for longer drawn out notes you sound a bit wobbly and off tune. Try to keep everything concise since you pull of the lyrics so much better when you say them quickly.

-The beat in the background goes well too but it could be interchanged for something else and still sound good.

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[[S:C] Mr. Funkhausen]

Good Job

-Quite an interesting collaborational work. The drum work is excellent in it's own regards and were mixed well even though they are a bit light. Come to think of it the instruments as a whole are very light. I'm guessing lyrical work was planned for this but still needs to be added.

-The only issue I had was with how much use of the cymbals there was. It's probably the pace setter you used but it drones on towards the end. Also the thirty blank seconds at the end. You can trim that stuff off.

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SymbolCymbal responds:

Well right now newgrounds own BIGRED (Tingtonger) is composing the lyrics to this piece .. once i get the lyrical audio in there this is going to get revamped a bit. ill definitely take your cymbal comment into consideration while redoing some stuff. This song will actually be available on the haiti relief album coming out soon. If not the haiti relief album it will be on some sort of charity album.

Thanks for the sweet review man

[DiscoSex(WiP)]

Lol

-Those vocals are crisp, clean, and quite interesting. Especially the moan towards the end. It definitely needs some snare to give more dimension. It's very repetitive in the instrumental aspects of the song. This could only benefit from being extended and adding some more vocals.

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DavidRx responds:

thx for the review ;D...sry for the HUUUUGE DELAY XD

sadly...lost this flp. too ;S so i cant continue it D;

[The Pleonasm]

Not that great

-It's very weak as a whole. It never rose up and did anything spectacular. It only just caught my attention in the last thirty seconds with an almost melody. Mentioning that there isn't a solid melody throughout which it really needed. The drums are very light and repetitive. They need to be brought out more to have any sort of effect.

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[Alot of Heart (WIP)]

Nice Job

-I just love original songs put on here. It takes talent to put together a catchy song that's also enjoyable to listen to at the same time.

-The instrumentals get a bit repetitive but i'm guessing you wanted to keep the whole constant beat going. I liked how you used a tambarine in there to compliment the guitar chords.

-You have a very interesting voice that is great for folky songs. It matches well with the melody of the song.

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