sixflab's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ocean...]

Well

-It's very soothing and relaxing. The melody has that effect of just calming you down. Not too fast, not too slow, just about the right speed to keep a steady pace and not too loud.

-I think it could of benefitted from a bit more variety. You have subtle changes in the undertones from time to time but nothing that really brought about a change. It doesn't need to be too often but once in a while add something a little different in for a change of pace.

-Review Request Club

EvilScorpio responds:

Okay, I'll try to do it next time) Thanks for the review)

[Chikaboom [box-killa]]

Well well sir

-You have quite the catchy tune here. Very bright and energetic if you ask me. A great way to just get up and get energized.

-The melody is also very unique and dynamic. It never seems to stay the same way for too long. It just flows how you would if you were dancing. Helping you choreograph your own moves to the song. It kept me entranced through the entire thing. It all ended up culminating brilliantly towards the end with the gradual letdown into the piano.

-The bass was a bit much for me at times. It just seemed a little too deep. I'm not saying that it overpowered any other part of the song. It fit nicely with what you did but I think it could of benefited from a little less bass in some areas of the song.

-Still it's one of your better submissions and I really enjoyed listening. I'll have to check out some of your other stuff some other time.

-Review Request Club

[Calliope]

Great

I'm definitely not saying that is a bad thing at all, but you have to admit this sounds like something that would play in Paper Mario or any Mario RPG when you are either fighting the ultimate boss (preferably it would be Bowser. It could really be any other boss though. Great work anyways, but I really think that listening to any song of this length 50 times CAN'T be good at all for your health.

[_-={A Dark Cut}=-_]

Great

It's relentlessly dark, with a sense of desperate urgency. Then after the 1 minute mark, it carries an evocative tone with the theme fully fleshed out. This is an amazing song, the kind that makes you stare at the game menu just listening to the music. Excellent work!

[[DX] A Cold Night]

Not enough variety

-This would work great as background instrumentals for vocals but it isn't mentioned anywhere about that so i'm just assuming that this is an instrumental only project.

-It's a short repetitive track basically. The melody repeats itself over and over with only the intro being unique. If you want to rework this keep the first 45 seconds or so and try adding more variety as a whole after that.

-Review Request Club

dx5231 responds:

Yeah, I know there is not enough variety, I guess I have to work more on this track. And yes, this is an instrumental only project.

Thanks for the review.

[[G] Friday Night - WIP]

Catchy

-It starts out a bit slow and could use a longer play-in. Unless you are going for the beginning note to cue in the vocals. That was something I did notice that was done rather well. The music really helped the vocals flow and they rolled right out.

-I think you should finish this though. It has a great start and the beat works well for the pace that you are using. I couldn't honestly grasp a rhyme scheme though unless you were using some form of slant rhyme. I had to listen several times to get the lyrics so posting the lyrics somewhere in the author comments would really help.

-Review Request Club

Jirohbomb responds:

I just uploaded the lyrics for your personal enjoyment. Glad you think that I should finish this. I'll have a finished version of this in a few days.

[Short Circuit]

It's ok

-Nice intro effects. Simple but they got the job done as far as starting everything out nice and easy.

-I liked the drop at :59 only to have everything come back up with a faster pace and a darker melody. It seemed like it skitted notes and blended them together.

-Only problem I saw with this was that you may have put too much variety into this. It's kind of spastic in parts and drab in others. Work on the pacing of songs in general.

-Review Request Club

Somnocyde responds:

Hey Much appreciated. I'd agree that alot of the melodies (as well as their intros) were pretty random. All in all, my up-and-coming submissions will be loads better. Thanx Alot! <>,..,<>RAWR

[epic 8-bit awesomeness]

Not bad

-It's six months out and only has seven reviews before me. It's sad how much activity goes on in the audio portal :/ well other than great works like this being created.

-You did wonders with only 8-bit sounds. You could really expand this if you had more to work with but lets face it, you aren't going to have tons of flashy things from something that was so limited.

-I loved how you mixed the melody up in certain places and made it layered with two paces. The transitions were good too without any noticable note breaks.

-Review Request Club

superuberinsaneausm responds:

thanks!!!

[Coop83 V.S Mans0n]

Well

-It's hard to judge accurately since it doesn't have the vocals yet. That being said half of the song is technically missing. Just try and convince Coop to sing a little or something lol.

-It has a nice upbeat pace with some interesting pads. At least that's what I think it was that was making the clomp clomp noise at the beginning. Sometimes it's a bit hard to recognize when it's computer generated. I would like to see more percussion instruments used or at least some more bass.

-There was an awkward transition at around :57. It doesn't seem intentional but it sounds really bad and interrupts the whole flow of the song. It would most likely sound better with the vocals layed over and i'm not sure exactly where you are going with this because of that :/

-Review Request Club

Mans0n responds:

Transition at 0:57 seconds is just fine.

[Metroid Dubstep]

WIP?

-The intro was the best part of this. It definitely had that metroid feel. It was nice and slow and the wobbles were used nicely to accentuate the original melody.

-I'm not saying the bridge was bad but it wasn't good either. It didn't fit in well with everything else. It just stuck out like a sore thumb and took away from the quality of the whole song.

-Review Request Club

superuberinsaneausm responds:

yea,could of used a diffrent theme for the bridge