Yes
-First song that I have listened to today with actual effort that really shows. The intro just pumps and gets into your face. At :47 the piano only helped with this even more.
-Nice pace having it go up and then go right back down. I felt it gave it a nice tempo that felt a little progressive.
-The solo felt a little underdone and could of had some undertones or a follow up of the same notes in the background.
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Thanks for your review!
I'll always put effort into my submissions, otherwise I'd feel there wouldn't be a point in making them :P
There are actually undertones in the background, but with little mixing skills I couldn't bring them up without them taking over the other instruments. I'll have to learn mixing from scratch, or use multiple project files per track.
Are you serious?
-It's not funny at all and it really has no point other than telling us something that nobody cares about.
-At times you seem to get caught on the lyrics and stutter a little. It needs to be mastered some too since it's kind of low quality. Even if you are playing by yourself add some other instruments in a program and edit it some to fix some of the problems.
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Dude i just really hate greg
Ehh :(
-Honestly this remix had a lot wrong with it. I know how difficult it is to remix a song with that much already going on at once. The intro clashes a bit to begin with and doesn't get alleveated too much when the actuall drum and bass elements begin.
-At times the violin seems a bit off and sounds like it needs tuning. The cause could be from having used a slightly different note. I'm not entirely sure though.
-Overall the song seemed too cluttered and had a tad too much repetitiveness for it to sound good to me.
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thx, the "Violin"(it was strings :P) melody was from a midi, i tried not using it but i not really good at remaking melodies by hearing them. it was just a thing i did for fun, so it obviously was gonna be like that, if i actually put time in it (like i did in the "power of drum&bass") it would probably be better. well bye now.
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-Oh my, this was good. It's so soothing to listen to. It's one of the major reasons that I like ambient songs. They are just so calm and don't just pound your ears.
-I loved how slowly it came in and progressed at a nice even tone becoming quite a happy opportunistic song at about the :55 mark.
-I would of much rather seen this as a song instead of a loop since it loops very bad. The ending didn't allow for it to loop properly since a new instrument was added(drum/conga) at the end but is completely missing whenever it loops.
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Well
-The wobble in the short loop had a nice reverberating touch to it where it doubled over. It complimented the kick of the drum nicely.
-It comes in nice with the first six seconds of audio but the break in between wobbles sounds a bit awkward to me and could of benefitted from a different drum combination.
-The abrupt end makes it seem like you just left it and never came back to it. I usually don't like work that isn't finished. If you ever get the time to you should.
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i had never worked on a wobble before, so i decided to throw it up here for input on it, generally my wips have a lot more work on them :)
Synths
-You sir did a swell job incorporating many synths into this song that kept the pace and excitement up. I would like to see the finished product be a little slower or add an additional instument with a slower pace as to add a new dimension.
-Overall nice start and since it's just a demo I can't wait for the finished product.
Well
-I think you did a nice job overall of mixing things up as far as the pace goes. Many different chord combinations, subtle use of the drums, finger snaps, and slight static( I liked it even if it might not of been intentional).
-It came in a bit light for me though. I think the guitar could of been brought in a little earlier.
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The static was intentional, I just felt like it would bring some warmth to the sound :)
Thanks for reviewing!
Pt.2>Pt.1
-This is one great example of when slower is better. It brings everything out in full swing.
-I really enjoy the deeper tones that you added to the same melody. It gives me the impression of a whistling wind coming through. Brushing your troubles away and as you say "start anew".
-In my opinion it is much better than the first installment since it gives you a little time to relax and listen to the song rather than trying to keep up with the song.
-I honestly couldn't find anything that had an issue in this one. It's very versatile too for the fact that it will work for a lot of things which makes it very likely to be used in other people's work.
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Thanks! This is one of the reviews I've been looking for! I totally agree, I like this one way more than part one, but the majority of NG thinks otherwise for some reason. Yea, I love the melody here. It's actually not the same, but its similar, using the same note sequences (like D, C#, then A; G, F#, then D; and my favorite, A, G then F#). Also, both songs are in D major. In this song, I arpeggiated the melody so it has more rhythm and spice.
Yea, I know you had no issue with this one. That's what I've been wanting to hear. I tried my absolute best, to make this my best song yet. And it is. But its kinda odd how part one is doing a lot better than this one.
Yes, hopefully this would be used in other people's work! If you know of anyone who is willing to have any of my songs in their work, just persuade them to!
Thanks for the nice review!
Wow
-The pace was blisteringly fast but it's not too fast at the same time. Nice use of a fast pace with slower additions. It shows for a nice blended song that is suitable to me.
-Very happy song that just makes me want to get up and dance. It just seemed a bit repetitive until the end when you slowed it down.
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Haha thanks! Aww, you cut off the 10 streak lol, haha its all good though! I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for the review!
Well
-This is definitely an epic jam of sorts. Something to get you pumped up and to get you out of your seat.
-Firstly i'll say that I liked what you had going with the background. Calm, yet it helped progress the song nicely. Well paced and made the bass kick that much more(when implemented).
-I think you could of made this a bit longer though. It feels a little shortcoming being less than two minutes. To me the song was still building and then it just abrubtly ended makeing me feel a little dissapointed. It's not like you can never work on something similar to this later though.
Thanks for the review! I'm not very good at extending things. I like my songs short and sweet. :| I'm sorry if it's too short. You're right.
I'm a pretty laid back person. Like some things about the new design but still like a lot of things from the old one :/
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