Great
-Well first off cool intro, there the lead did not sound to weak as it was alone, but after some while i think it lost its power, and when you added a second synth, you just surprised me, you didnt introduce the coming of it, you just added it. I think maybe to introduce things as the song goes along is VERY important, or else i just get surprised =P I think maybe another lead, and to plan some parts/transitions/bridges more would be a great first step to make this into a REALLY great track!
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Second off i would like to mention that this mix is a mess, as said earlier i think that you didnt introduce your transition/bridges well enough, and therefor i think the song just lacked a ''point'' And it just became a mess of parts, good parts though! But it lacked a propper structure, now hhc or not, it needs a propper structure! xD