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Nice

While it's not the most amazing song it definitely has some nice atmospheric elements that really attribute to the soothing feeling that this song gives off. I enjoyed listening to this and it's great to just let sit in the background while i'm doing something.

FuNaNdMoRe responds:

Great to hear you enjoyed it.

Well

-As far as I can tell you seem to create songs at a rapid pace lately. I can't even seem to get myself around to reviewing as fast as you are making new songs(i'm like 5 behind XD). If anything it shows your dedication to creating music though since you're constantly working at it.

-The introduction is crazy slow but it at least hits and starts to speed up rather quickly as the build-up starts to become more apparent. The song felt like more build-up than anything else though. Maybe you could incorporate an extended climax of sorts if you come back to this. Plenty of bass throughout except for the complete drop at about 2:30 which left the song to fade out nicely.

-Overall it's a pretty nice song with a catchy beat. Very quickly paced for the most part without really overdoing anything. The melody balanced out very well with the amount of percussion. The synth isn't too overused which is great since you could of easily brought it to the forefront.

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Mans0n responds:

thanks for the review :) and yeah I do make songs pretty quick. Which could be be more or less of a bad thing.

Robot Day

-Well you definitely did take a different perspective to your Robot Day submission than i've heard anyone else take. Like you said when you think about robots you usually think about the clunky old ones and the metallic rough sounds. But robots have advanced much since then and can be very smooth and gentle when they do certain objectives.

-I really like how this song played out and the majesticness of the robot that you portrayed. Nothing too overly fancy was done but it was very good to my ears and I really enjoyed giving this a listen. While you said it was mastered a lot there are some spots where the effects were clipped :( It's not exactly a sin but it's one of those things that will most likely get picked out and spotted by the judges of the contest. Otherwise everything was well in order.

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MrFijiWiji responds:

i will fix that then! ty for the heads up :D

Simple

-Well it definitely is a simple little song. Well not exactly little since it is a little over five minutes long but while it isn't all that complicated the melody is okay at least. I think it drags on some and could of been shortened since it is such a simple song. It sounds a lot like something you would hear while strolling around in a Pokemon game and after looking at your other titled songs it seems like this is your area of expertise. I at least did enjoy listening to this and I guess that's what is most important.

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Radidsh responds:

Hi there, sixflab from the Review Request Club!

The song is long and may seem boring, and I believe this is one of my major flaws of composing up to this point. I both have a lack of instruments and a lack of knowledge to use them, but I believe I am getting better at least. Fruity Loops 3 is the program I usually use, but this one was created using Modplug Tracker, which is a freeware text-based module tracking program.

Earlier, I was hearing something similar, that I was making music that easily would fit into the Sonic the Hedgehog games or universe. Pokémon is one of the games I love to play at the moment, not to mention video games at all (I love video game music), so I do take that as a big compliment! X3

Thank you lots for the nice review and kind words. I am happy that you enjoyed listening to it! That is indeed (I hope) what counts, and I hope that next time I make an audio project, it will be more earcandy to it. =3

Seeyou around, and thanks!

Nice

-I'm not sure if it's just because I like indie music but I found myself liking this quite a bit even though it isn't that high on the quality production. It just sounds a bit rough around the edges and would benefit from some mastering.

-I was able to keep up with the lyrics with relative ease in this song but the frequency of lyrics wasn't all that fast. I really liked the pace of how the lyrics were sung. There were quite a few repeated sections leading me to believe that you went over the chorus a couple of times throughout the duration of the song.

-The instrumentals really sat back nicely and supported the vocals very well. Some nice electronic effects incorporated with the melody, not too much percussion, and it wasn't too repetitive. I feel that it's much of an improvement on some of your recent works that i've listened to.

-Review Request Club

Sawdust responds:

Thanks!

LOL

-What I think is so great about this is that while it seems like you are trying to be completely serious with this the lyrics are just absolutely absurd. I mean who thinks of using a train as the main focal point of a song anymore.

-It's not exactly the heaviest metal song or anything close to standard heavy metal it's great for a little school short. I would give it points just for the sheer choo choo awesomeness of the train sounds. This actually peaks my interest as far as listening to the other little school projects that you have made.

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Screch responds:

Thanks. I'm uploading 2 more right now so you can review them too if you'd like

Well

-As much as I wanted to break the combo of tens that I saw you building up I just couldn't give you something lower than what this deserves in my opinion here. Your work is usually really good and while it isn't the best it's starting to get up there in the overall quality. You take time with your work and that's the biggest step after all. Once you take time with your work all it is after that is putting all that you have learned together into something.

-This song shows some peaks of greatness since it doesn't entirely stay in the trance genre. It flowed smoothly from transition to transition and dabbles in different melodies and instrument combinations during different areas of the song. This mixing and matching kept me on my toes, metaphorically, and I never really knew what to expect as the song progressed. It even had that atmospheric presence in the initial build-up instead of drowning us in song complexity.

-Like I said earlier I was trying to be nit-picky and try to find areas where you made mistakes but try as hard as I might I just wasn't able to find anything that was overly glaring and deserving of a downgrade in your score. Just keep working and i'm sure you will produce some gems in the future.

-Review Request Club

KroweMusic responds:

Thanks you so much for all of the wonderful complements! You guys at the Review Request Club are great!

-Title-

-Well it's nice to see that you have lost your virginity.

-It's pretty good for a first attempt at making a wobble but like TeKNeTiC said it's just a little too hard and that makes it less free flowing. The melody in the background is a nice polar opposite to the abbrasive wobble though.

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Nice

-It's definitely not all that complex or complicated but who says a song has to be all fancy smancy to be good. I enjoyed it just as much as any other song even though it didn't have a whole ton of instrumental elements in it. This was pretty much entirely electronic which is a little different than what i'm used to but it has quite the interesting sound to it.

-While most of the song stays with the same melody with a few variations here and there it stayed interesting and didn't fall into the category of boring and repetitive. I will have to say 1:07 was purely orgasmic to my ears and was definitely my favorite melody of the group and really the rise in volume and variation at that point was great.

-For a first time dabbling into this genre i'd say you did a pretty good job with this song. Maybe even adding more percussion without it staying with the same beat the entire time would be one of the things that would greatly improve the listening experience.

-Review Request Club

Review

-The instrumental combination of the guitar(s) and the drums in the background were aptly introduced in a usual way but the five or so seconds of delay on the guitar riffs made them seem more dramatic as they overpowered the drums. I noticed that the melody stayed a bit consistent during the lyrical part of the song to keep everything together in time. It was nice and helped put some umph into each line coming in.

-While the lyrics are well placed(delay thirty seconds to let the instruments get involved and being in the main lyrical progression at the beginning) there just aren't that many. Probably to keep the lines more compact and in line with the riffs but it would of been nice to see more lyrics in the storyline. A couple of lines sound like they are a bit rough when they are being sung and aren't consistently at the same volume.

-Like most heavy metal songs it's all about the guitars and the complexity of the riffs being played and how well they sound as they are being played. As soon as the lyrics ended was when this really started to show and I think you did a fine job with the riff progression in the end. Everything was going at quite the pace and intensity until you pulled up and slowed down to play out the finish.

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Jeffaro responds:

I put my heart and soul into this song. I took my time! It took me appoximately a half a year to write this song. I'm glad that you like it.

As for the vocals I tried to make go along with the riffs while trying not to take up too much space. For me the music its self is more important than the lyrics. This is why I tried to stray away from doing repetative choruses and such.

Thanks!

I'm a pretty laid back person. Like some things about the new design but still like a lot of things from the old one :/

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