sixflab's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Are U Ready {Dj-Abbic mix} WIP]

I think I am

-I could be wrong but I think I am ready to review this after listening to this fine musical piece your working on. The introduction is a rather long enduring process but by no means a boring process. You may have to trim some of that off in the final cut of this song though.

-It's a very generic house introduction. It wouldn't do well to leave your listeners in a state of waiting for too long. It is rather odd that the main transitional phase in the song is that well rounded. Nice effect used to make a "hush" sound. But it's where everything gets really interesting and more fleshed out. Curious to see how this ends up.

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DjAbbic responds:

Ha, thanks for the review. The generic intro wasn't too long that listeners would just leave, but that's my opinion, so I kept it in. It's always important that you like what you make. I guess this preview sounds so much more exciting compared to the final because it's always hard to come up with ideas on what you can add.

[-Lullaby]

Great

-This is beautifully played and recorded. Albiet is is rather slow and low sounding at times. Well put together overall and not anything that glares out as a fault in any way. While this could of been longer that might of not been the best way to go with this which shows that this was well thought out. Definitely worth the time put into this piece.

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BlazingDragon responds:

I meant for this to be longer, but I only had two or three days at the music camp I attended. I handed this in not completed but kind of like it this way. As far as the slowness, the performer was sight reading it! Pretty impressive. So yes, he did play it a bit slow.

Thank you for the thoughtful words, sixflab.

[Band On The Run (Trippmix)]

Wow

-This is really overkill on the ears. So much distortion that the vocals are awful but funny to listen to. I love the original song so it's cool to see a remix of it but i'd still like to of seen less distortion. It feels really drawn out since it's so slow but the original is a rather long song also. The introduction was definitely my favorite part and it would of been awesome if you could of incorporated that into the song more.

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Blackdoom13 responds:

Yeah I put a shitload of effects in my voice because I suck at singing. Sorry it was that bad lol

[Seashore Ambiance [WIP]]

On the seashore

-I really like where you are going with this. I have this picture of kids playing on the seashore with waves crashing down. A little sandcastle in the wake with parents not too far behind in the background. It could really go either way after this though. You could have more joyous occurances or have a tragic event befall the situation and bring in darker undertones.

-But I like keeping the joyous atmosphere in this case since it just would make everyone happier in the end. I'm not saying to keep everything the same since it would make it more repetitive but adding more of that drum that you were using would be nice. Mixed with the melody i'm assuming it would sound great.

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jxl180 responds:

Thank you for the review. I am going to keep it on the lighter, happier side.

[cmb79 - daftish (bitchbeatmix)]

Well

-This just seems too cluttered and spastic. While you did structure the introduction of different instruments they end up overlapping each other in the middle and it makes it sound worse than this could have been if you stretched it out.

-Not that good of quality overall and the main thing that you could do is spend time to build instrumental sounds from the ground up. Mixing and matching different things and experimenting is never a bad idea.

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cheesemonkeybill responds:

your mom likes experimenting too

[The rise of -]

...

-Very nice atmospheric piece. It's one of the main reasons I enjoy classical type music best as a purely instrumental work. I love how deep and dark it starts out only to lighten as the song progressed becoming more triumphant and determined. It did come to an unexpected end for me but it's most likely due to the cliffhangar aspect and not a full ending.

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Tomppaah responds:

Thank you so much for your comment :) I will try to finish the second theme, so the cliffhanger can come to justice ;)

[[Assios] - Eternal Rave]

Well

-This is a pretty swell song when you break it down. It may be rather repetitive but at the same time it really moves the song progressively forward unlike most repetitive songs. Probably because the song is just so energetic and lively.

-Comes in very slow but as stated the melody just was a lot quicker than one would think. Definitely better suited to listen to at a higher volume since it does it more justice. Looking forward to some more.

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Assios responds:

Thanks! :)

[HAL-9000step]

Great

-This is some pretty good dubstep with a story to go with it which is a high note but I expected this to be much nastier than it is. But it's very crisp and precise which shows much mastering and care in the finishing of this. Shame you couldn't do this for the robot day competition that was last month since it's rather robotic. Mixing is very well done for this one but most of your stuff is done in high quality.

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superuberinsaneausm responds:

sigh,if i only had a time machine.....

[~|| Eyes of a Traitor]

Great

-This sounds great and very light with the use of bells throughout. Not too loud either as you kept everything in check and pretty close to each other. Nice pacing also with somewhat of a solid build in the song. I just wish it didn't sound so repetitive in some parts. Hip-hop tends to do that though and i'm sure this would be much improved as soon as you can get some lyrics to add onto this with.

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[BAZ - A Piano Song @190.69bpm]

Well

-This would sound so much better if it wasn't so cluttered together. More spacing and progression would lengthen the song but also allow you to introduce different parts at different times while layering it better so everything isn't playing at once.

-I love piano melodies and the ones you have here sound excellent. The snare is very abrasive in comparison to the soft melody and doesn't work well to be honest. I'd love to see more piano but in a simpler song.

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BAZmotherfucker responds:

Thanks review request club!