sixflab's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pico's Penny Prank]

Nice short

-I'll admit it's a pretty nice gag that pico decided to put on. Having a penny used in this day and age doesn't make too much sense since it won't buy you anything but money is money and if I saw it I would of tried to pick it up too. I liked the odd coloring used as it makes it all the more unrealistic and funny. Animation seemed a bit goofy with pico bobbing up and down at one point. But for the most part it was well done for the cartoon. Overall it's a great little short that you put together for pico day.

-Review Request Club

ToonCastleTV responds:

Hahah for some reason I thought how I pulled off pico in the beginning was the best way to open up the scene :P thanks for the great review :D

["We're Starfox!"]

Well put together

You did a great job of making the movie fluid. I can't believe you were able to tell your own story using only quotes from the game. Besides that, you even made it a flash of decent length. Must of been rather time consuming to put together the script for this and it pays off. Congratulations on how well this has done.

PuffballsUnited responds:

Yeah, it started off as a bunch of short clips. The hardest thing was getting them all to fit together to form a story.

[[Soup] Truth of Osama]

I can convert you ;)

-What kind of a sniper doesn't carry any bullets on him? I found that a bit odd but taco soup could of just been trigger happy earlier. He was talking about unloading when he sees dick's. Which was quite funny as it fit's into newgrounds humor perfectly and that's why I found this to be one of the funnier parodies of Osama's death. Great lines and that can make a simple looking animation all the better. Even if it's late it doesn't mean that it isn't good.

-Facial expressions were rather welcome as it made the characters more life like(if that is possible). Not sure if the spoons are entirely necessary since you use actual voice work but it's still a nice touch so people don't get confused since there aren't mouths. The crooked sniper and the can opener were ironic, but not out of place all things considered.

Dosensuppen responds:

The extra bullet thing was somewhat ironic, as well as a can carrying a can opener -- if that's what you meant. The spoons were there to somewhat mock the Clocks, but it does help if someone can't tell the voices apart.

But this kind of humor I'm glad you found tasteful. We tried to deliver something for Newgrounds. It seemed to have failed for the first few comments. Plus, we just didn't like the other shitty flashes coming in.

But I think it turned out well for a flash that wad made in a day.

[Modern Waffle 2]

And the world was saved

I can understand where you are coming from. This isn't the best drawn or animated work compared to a lot of flashes that have been produced. But it's nowhere near bad. This shines through in comedic value and making fun of a lot of the overly cinematic cutscenes that MW2 had. Plus I don't have to go play the game to see them as you put them all together here. Nice for your first submission and hopefully there will be more to come.

DebiruMuffin responds:

Thank you, sixflab. I appreciate your feedback.

[[Soup] Pico Soup]

Nice pico day flash

-Not bad. Not bad at all. I can't say I was expecting this at all. It's better than what I can do but it's still far from being up there with the better animations for pico day. The note next to the preloader is a nice touch to start us off though.

-The backgrounds aren't entirely smooth. They have a gritty feel to them and it fits for this kind of flash. The color scheme of just different colors of gray felt a little underwhelming though. Boxes could have been brown. Maybe some miscellaneous items strewn around. I did like the club member usernames on the walls.

-Animation style gets the job done and isn't too choppy. For the most part runs through nicely. Multiple angles makes it more dramatic. Pico never was able to show any pizzazz though as he was suprised and quickly knocked out. Thus his demise came soon after. Seemed like this progressed too quickly and if you weren't rushed for time maybe a more in depth story could of unfolded.

-Sounds were perfectly placed. The story seemed more realistic with them besides the bat sound. Maybe getting a more muffled sample so it didn't crack so hard. That and the shortness were the two main flaws but i'm sure with more time in the future and practice you'll put out something great.

-Review Request Club

Dosensuppen responds:

Ah, a truly in depth examination of this flash. Everything you said, I agree with. Of course, I feel all the sounds were a bit off. I had to edit most of them. Yes, we were rushed, my BG artist was rushed to make them too. I'm glad they were gritty, however.

I must agree with some of the expressions and lack of character for Pico, but as I said, we were rushed. But, I beg for no pity. I'm amazed how much positive reception I have received when compared to the better artists.

I plan to work with my partner on a new project with a whole lot more time put it in. I think we do a decent mix.

[asdfm0vie4]

Better than expected

I'll admit that at first glance of seeing this in the turd of the week slot I didn't have high hopes for what I was going to watch. But it turned out to be not that bad for a parody. The animation is rather sub par but like you've mentioned the original lacks a lot of animating skill. I think you even surpass it in actual hilarity which is it's main focal point. But the hilarity was short lived as this was rather short. A little more touch and polish on this and it would have been gold.

Heil responds:

okay

[As Heaven/Earth Collide]

Good for a first

-I dabbled in this kind of animation a few years back but never bothered to put much effort into mine. Always nice to see someone doing something nice for a friend and you chosea cool way to animate it. I like seeing fbf since I know it's a little more difficult. Nothing too fancy here but it goes with the song and has it's moments.

-Not sure why you didn't animate the whole song and put up a "The End" kind of in the middle. Maybe you just ran out of ideas or didn't have time but it would look better completed. Also a slightly higher frame rate wouldn't hurt in the future since it's still a little jolty in parts here. But overall it's good for a first and I look forward to improvement.

-Review Request Club

Frankthemagicalfish responds:

Yeah I just wanted to get it out there for now but I'm working on finishing it. Thanx.

[Leo & Satan IV]

Superb

That was by far the best Leo and Satan to date. From the ending on the last one I thought for sure there wouldn't be a sequel but you proved me wrong. But good ol' Satan wouldn't let Leo die I suppose. Definitely suprised me at the beginning. But you've brought up a lot of gamer's problems in this one. So dramatic yet so hilarious. Also I hope that turkey is okay. A night with a hobo can't be good for it.

Oney responds:

haha that's a blow up sheep :P