Well
-This is probably the most random video i've seen in a while. I always thought it was going to end and then bam another random turn in the plot would happen. I thoroughly enjoyed it for the way the story unfolded as it's something that you don't see too often.
-Drawing could of been a lot better though since it's done with the brush tool and cropping of pictures. I do that but seeing as how this is much better than what I usually do I expected some higher quality drawings. Animation wise it's pretty good but it's kind of slow and choppy.
-Overall this is just lacking a lot production wise since a lot of really old flashes look way better than this. Better voice capturing and some practice drawing and animating in flash and i'm sure you will improve.
-Review Request Club